Question
Is this a good poem?
i wrote this in about minutes and please be as harsh as necessary
Answer
I love this. It really makes you think.brAnd as you can see from my poem a hurt heart or a heart broken into four pieces can still feel. In fact the feelings are amplified. It now feels even more. It may be shy and timid, but can feel even more once its been healed because its felt love, broken love, and repaired love.
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