Question
Is this a good beginning to my book?
Id like to know if you like it or are intrested in reading more.
Answer
The first few paragraphs are poorly written quotI was watching the trees and houses zoom by out the window of the school bus on this very rainy and gloomy day....Tall, fair skinned, dark hair, and his eyes were dark and piercing brown. quot. That parts rather dull and overdone in a cliche, less than creative way. But by the end of this passage, I do kinda want to read more. I like how you make the girls thoughts pretty realistic and complex.
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