Question
Is this a poem??
I dont want to cause harm
Answer
Yes, its a poem but, it needs a bit of tightening up as with any rhyme scheme it needs to have a good meter, count, ya know?brbrNo worries though, Im always going back through my stuff LOLbrbrOther than that, youve got some awesome lines in this piece my friend, well done and Pen On lt
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