Is this a good poem?Or is it bad?

Question

Is this a good poem?Or is it bad?
Heal a breaking heart?

Answer

See if you like my edits at all. I changed the line breaks they were too choppy and random before, the reader will put those pauses in naturally, and fixed grammar, etc, and changed quotreal lifequot to quotrealityquot because it flowed better.brbrTo Heal a Breaking HeartbrbrHow do you heal a breaking heartbrthat feels like its falling apart?brHow do you fix the cracks in your heartbrto stop what you didnt start?brbrHow do soothe a persons painbrwhen in reality the pain is in vain?brTell me.brHow do you heal a breaking heartbrwhen you cant stop it cause it hasnt begun to start?brbrbrbrOverall, Id say its ok. I think you should consider revising the rhyme in the third and fourth lines of the revised version, because you use the same two words heart and start in the last two lines the repetition is unnecessary. In any case, good luck