Question
Is this a good poem? please be honest?
If in my quest achieve my goals
Answer
you have the ability to make a great poem, youve got the natural knack n all...BUT the biggest problem is i dont know what your trying to say..i know what ur poems says but i dont know why youre saying it...you just needa narrow down on your objective, be more obvious on what youre trying to tell in ur poem and more people will me able to easily relate to it, its gotta be understandable in order to be relatable, and only when its relatable can you ever get a reaction out of ppl...
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